"...never..."

"...never..."

A Poem by Chris
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I paused with Sharonlee's thoughts...

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I paused with Sharonlee's thoughts...


"...never..."

 

I close my eyes and see

so much more than there always just was

- the magyk within

each breath and dream...

fingertips rustling the wind...

rainbows in raindrops,

all the echoes

in the tears I've shed and

in those I've softly brushed away.

I've shared haunted moments

and darknesses too.

Tasted life-happens as only IT does.

Been the last to walk ...away -

the last smile standing...

as the sun ...sets just THERE beyond my fingertips,

THERE - as my breath expands to transparency

and beyond...

petting the Cheshire cat and feeling it purrrrr...

 

Chris

 

Thank you Shar... ALWAYS and ever... for the thoughts that brought this.

© 2014 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
feel free but visit Sharonlee

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I lingered within these thoughts for a few moments, your poetic honesty has always been beautiful. ..moments passed before I fully realized. ... and I smiled and I thank you my dear friend, and for all the many thoughts we have shared over the years.
I have missed many of you in my absence. ♡

Posted 5 Years Ago


Chris

5 Years Ago

Welcome back... your visions and insights make this such a better place.
Trust you to showcase sharonlee's writing and artwork, the time she moved into the shadows, the cafe lost a true craftswoman. And you, Chris. are what the word 'friend' means. With absolute intention: pray and hope you both stay at the helm for as long as.. .. please very much.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful- and yes there just there - not far as we think it is as it’s actually here just here🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


the last smile standing ...i like that ...its a better state of heart ... going to catch up with Sharonlee now .. your title seems at odds with the poem tho ... there is a lot of depth and living in it ... hmmm .. :) vivid images and creative personifications i see .. such a strong feeling of warmth and comfort in a life lived with voracity ...
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is such beautiful poem and i like it very much, there is no point to analize it further and all words i write would be so pale here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I see a light when my eyes are closed. I once saw a rainbow in the spray from a whales blow. You are the light at the end of that tunnel, Chris.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You see much more than there was. Perhaps many of us when looking backward at a lost love, add much more to the event than reality. Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Another enchanting one, with blinding imagery..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful as wondrous. I liked many phrases like the one 'rainbows in raindrops' ,it was a nice write.

armin. ..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Using my own interpretation and life experience this write has me feeling things I'd rather put away ... If only I knew how. Well written sir.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Chris

9 Years Ago

Thanks for pausing Ed... I do hope you visit Sharonlee's page.

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Chris

Lansing, MI



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