This is beautiful... I can FEEL it saying something, but can't quite catch what it is... One day... One day my mind will be clear enough and I will come back to read it. Then I can only hope I will understand it then! Thank you again, my friend, for sharing your writing with me. You definitely make me think!
Sweet and FREEDOM and LOVE expressed nicely - Everyone needs to know your message in this short poem. An example, to me, of how special we all are. Thank you.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I could have written this AFTER reading one of yours... though this was written well before I paused.. read moreI could have written this AFTER reading one of yours... though this was written well before I paused. Our inspirations are momentary and quite fragile as well as very real to a particular moment. The beauty of some thought is that a moment relates within more than one reality and draws us into it by our own.
I love it. Very beautiful, and simple, and heart felt. You know, I always said never again a poet, but a poem like this makes me reconsider, perhaps I am too harsh on that ...
you don't sound like anyone else...but your voice does something to me, no one else's does...
i like that...we each have a unique tune, a unique melody in how we sound...
and when there is love...it is more pronounced than ever.
"Life is a terminal disease." All the doctors have basically told me so.
"Life is an adventure... Pain, well you deal. Thanks for being here. 06/21/2020
I'm back and working on. I've been.. more..