"Surviving?..."

Monday thoughts

"Surviving?..."

Sometimes I wonder 

sometimes I don't.

Sometimes I should ...wonder

...and wander,

float off - away - 

'til lost or even found 

in thought -

and yet sometimes ...I won't.

Who, what, why...

when and where,

serious quests

and questions - for the unwary,

un-wise too.

Survive?

Me?

is there even a maybe in that?

...As my mind mysts

into transparency

expands and thins.

Ya think?

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Kind of feels that way some times.
Alive yet not ALIVE

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes these pieces make me sad. YOU are such a treasure. And it seems unfair that a soul as beautiful as yours would just be surviving on any day ...

[Nathan]

I think, your the one writer here on this cafe's site who every week plotted his own thoughts and then executes them all day-wise. That's pretty impressive! I may be learn these beautiful tips from ya...because after reading this piece, I gush that sometimes, it's so good to pen down the mind's thoughts into the paper and executing them according to days. Lovely. Moreover, I adore this poem. It's not even a poem for me but a great intellectual highly positioned stuff which touches my heart and allows me to consumes the drops of inspirations and let 'em go mixed up with my blood passing through my veins.

[Chris]

It's afternoon here... has been a gray day - but a thought-full one. Hi Nathan.

[Nathan]

Glad to make your day. Hey, Chris.

[Ashley White]

This was a poem I wish never ended it was beautifully written and makes you think :)

[Chris]

It snowed this morning... must be Tuesday

[Ashley White]

as it did here....it was very unusual

[KWP]

Ya I think
Quite often
In overdrive
About what is it that
Keeps me alive

The fresh breath of my face
Lives of interwoven lace

Connecting to the world anew
A beautiful thing to do
Moment to moment
I lament
I should pitch up my tent
But flowing
Is the way I shall keep going


Trala la xxx

[J. J. Nightingale]

We've "Survived" so many things, and places..
You and I .. and her and him
Said good-bye so many times .. and breathed
I read obits in the local paper everyday
Survived By ..............
Guess it means we made it.. after ALL
And have the power to ponder big and small..
But to what end .. To only be a photo or a few lines
That line a bird cage the next day ..
it's up to us.. to give a way ..and a hand
To each and every one we can...
No matter the size of that existing grey matter..
Just maybe we will Survive forever
In someone's Heart .

No.. there is no Maybe .. You will Survive ♥♥
OK OK... I RAMBLE .. but I also Love....

Jazz

[Frieda P]

I tend to think most minds 'mysts' in muchly the same way...no matter how hard we ponder, we're still not totally sure are we? Always food for thought in your observations Chris. Enjoy your weekend. x

[sharonlee]

We do the best we can, when we can... with a little help from friends... and we survive, and breath, and even smile. x

[Chris]

Yeah, we do all those as we can Shar ...as we can.