"Starlight, Star Bright..."

Monday thoughts

It isn’t because of Spring… you are a because of breathing.

Dreams are such terrible nothings to release…

 

"Starlight, Star Bright..."

 

Some thoughts just ...don't... fade

I don't want them to

won't let them

CAN'T let... them - you... 

expand into nothing

which is all I ever had

and ever will

...'cept each breath I held so TIGHT

- within -

as I dreamed and touched

my star...

 

Chris

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a whimsical notion...a tad bit melancholy.... (sigh)

Hold on to your star, sweet Chris...

This is lovely!~xoxo~

[Saddam]

"Starlight, Star Bright..."
Some thoughts just ...don't... fade
I don't want them to
won't let them
CAN'T let... them - you...

For mine this is one of finest art which I had read. In my little age I have read many novels but found poetry is great and full of imaginary. Your poetry is one of my image.

[sharonlee]

Some people touch our lives
in an intimately profound way
with their words
the look in their eyes
the sweet soulful
whisper
of their
unheard sighs...

[Chris]

Shar, this is one to live up to...

[sharonlee]

Chris, my sweet friend... some just do it by being who they are...

[s y e]

Sometimes our thoughts just don't seem to go away, they stick with us. This however, is so romantic Chris, you had me from the beginning!

[Chris]

Sye, you always leave me with a smile...

[Baby Ricochet]

Yep. Some thoughts just won't die. Great poem chris.

[Chris]

good seeing here... how goes the politicos agenda-izings?

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and you had me with the first line.
So soft and lovely. Stunning!

:) Julie

[Chris]

awww... nice of you to stop by...

[Frieda P]

Sigh an exquisitely breathtaking thought here Chris, simple, yet exhilarating... sweet dreams touching your own star...you make my imagination soar.

[olla]

a love poem... for a love-ly spring Monday... my breath is held tightly as I taste the nothing that is surely a something worth holding just as tightly...

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Amazing... If i had more sleep maybe... just maybe, I would be able to articulate how gorgeous this poem is. The thought of this love, this "star"... as essential as breathing, such an amazing thought, given to us with the first line, wow. It had me drawn in and holding my breath throughout the entire piece. The way you formed this poem begs for it to be preformed, I can almost hear it... and then the ending... I was done for, simply amazing!