"After The Rain..."

This is THE "After The Rain" -- After The Rain – a poem by Triin http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/estoniancloud/1332444/

After The Rain - a poem by Triin

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/estoniancloud/1332444/

For: Triin

A second language makes an intent harder to realize.  Melancholy and poignancy are harder to develop because the smoothness of required transitions tend to be lacking.  You touched me with your thoughts.

 

“After The Rain…”

I read your words aloud...

then read them again

and yet again

 

And "After The Rain"

each pause held a note...

"After The Rain"

each breath left a taste...

"After The Rain"

my eyes shimmered with

yesterdays' echoes

...and I remembered how to smile

again.

 

Chris

 

Author's Note

After The Rain – a poem by Triin
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/estoniancloud/1332444/

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Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

always appreciate a guide to a poet whose amazing work fills the soul. I am off to ramble through Trinn's words.. thank you Chris...

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh, Chris, this is lovely. And of course, prompts a read of Trinn's which is I am sure, your intention. Thank you.

[olla]

yes.. I felt the same way after I read Triin's a few times.. the wording made me stop and ponder.. each line held a hidden memory.. it is what poetry should do.. thank you.. I might not have seen it if you hadn't pointed the way..

[Dhaye]

There's a rainbow after the rain... a curve...and on my face such curve is my smile.
The rain is not good for me before. I associated it with tears and gloom. But one person made me believe that it is good. It heals a broken heart...it washes our souls. Now, I love the rain.

You know, I realized that here in our tropical country with only two distinct seasons (rainy and summer), where rainy season is so short, it should be treated as a blessing.

Your piece is something motivating, Chris. There's a rainbow after the rain.

[Chris]

and one also within you...