"After The Rain..."

This is THE "After The Rain" -- After The Rain – a poem by Triin http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/estoniancloud/1332444/

After The Rain - a poem by Triin

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/estoniancloud/1332444/

For: Triin

A second language makes an intent harder to realize.  Melancholy and poignancy are harder to develop because the smoothness of required transitions tend to be lacking.  You touched me with your thoughts.

 

“After The Rain…”

I read your words aloud...

then read them again

and yet again

 

And "After The Rain"

each pause held a note...

"After The Rain"

each breath left a taste...

"After The Rain"

my eyes shimmered with

yesterdays' echoes

...and I remembered how to smile

again.

 

Chris

 

Author's Note

After The Rain – a poem by Triin
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/estoniancloud/1332444/

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Reviews

[Ruth]

Inhaling life...refreshes the eyes and senses and much more, leads us to see we are still here, somehow xx

[Baby Ricochet]

I read triin's poem then this one. It's raining here today. When it stops I'll go outside and see what happens

[Chris]

Yes, do that...catch that breath of ...life.

[s y e]

I read Triin's poem first and then read this one and wow, you both have such amazing description and make your poems come to life.

[Chris]

I'm trying to get more to hear Triin... to know she exists... Hi Sye, you having a good day?

[s y e]

She is really good, Chris. :-) Yep, good one so far. How about you dude?

[Chris]

I'm thinking about another Chapter for "Walkin' The World A Bit..."

[s y e]

Sounds like a plan, can't wait to read it....

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I will read Triin's poem now.
Coyote

[Chris]

She has an understanding so deep it comes through even as a second language.

[Coyote Poetry]

I read three of her poems. She is amazing.

[Chris]

That was why I tried to bring her work to other's attention

[stars are far]

After the rain the soul of a human revive, and they feel that they are new...
well done ..i loved this

[Chris]

I was quite literally JUST looking at your page... like minds...

[sharonlee]

Such poetry as the one of Triin's you highlighted, and this one of yours (in truth all of yours) do ignite thoughts in the reader... side-tracks and epic journeys.

Thank you

[J. J. Nightingale]

I listened to Her poem, did bring thoughts ..

Thanks Chris................

Jazz xo

[Chris]

Thanks Jazz...

[J. J. Nightingale]

...........:)..................♥

[David Scott]

This reads similar to the thoughts I read in a poem by Elisa today...
The rain carries and cleanses much.
Yes, I agree it helps us remember how to smile as well.
thank you fro sharing this lovely write Chris.

[Chris]

Nice of you to pause...please go and listen to Triin... she deserves being heard...

[Debbie_Philly]

Beautiful !! You really write beautifully my friend !! :)

[Chris]

You pause me... and then you REALLY pause me. Yes, you do.

[Hayley]

Both lovely poems. Thanks for the read- it was needed.

[Chris]

Gawd...but YOU are Glowing!! And that is so very, very good to see... you take care.

[Hayley]

aw thanks!