"And Again The Echoes..."

Breathes so deeply

"And Again The Echoes..."

I've loved you every "where" there is...

My dark, my light -

tomorrows, yesterdays -

each and every today.

 

We've shared breath

and sight

tones and silly thoughts

moments I didn't realize

and moments I knew better than life.

 

I've touched tomorrow...

and smiled.

 

Chris

 

Author's Note

Feel Free

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Beautifully expressed. The hope and love within these lines is exquisite. Well penned. Thank you for sharing.

[lost girl]

This gives me hope....Hope that tomorrow is not borrowed in echoes....

[sharonlee]

And Again the Echoes
call me to read.

[Solilokiss]

Wonderful. There's a promise so optimistic and evident in this. Much enjoyed.

[Penlady]

Such love is the flavor in life....it is the gift received when two allow themselves be vulnerable enough to become one...a smile of remberance , smile of anticipation, yes! Touching tomorrow!

[Kimbers]

@)------ my favorite so far.

[Lyn Anderson]

A touching romantic verse, just enough sugar to make it delightful, not so much as to make my teeth ache. That's a tough one, because I am generally not into the side.:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

these are like echoes of words not even yet spoken...of tomorrows that will resonate with love and companionship...

the last two lines...significantly good..."I've touched tomorrow/ and smiled"

reminds me so much of something Paul Simon would have written back in the S&G days...

[Chris]

To be mentioned in the same breath with S & G... damn. I loved those guys.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they were my idols...November of '69..best concert I ever attended...thought I would be let down...I expected so much...I was in awe the whole time...first time Bridge was sung live...5 minute standing ovation...place went nuts..it was at SIU Arena...they and a female poet friend of mine were the reasons I started writing.

I can strongly relate to what you write, Chris...it's very real...never just made up words to make a poem happen...your words are feelings that happen to make you write them and feelings that make readers feel them.

[Lucifer Jones]

And I smile as well my friend... Thank you! A beautiful vision delivered again. Stunning work with such a simplistic approach. I love it!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

And I smiled...

Who wouldn't smile in this precious piece of yours, Sir Chris? It's so sweet and romantic. Simple words but go straight to the heart of any reader.

Thank you for this remarkable piece. Kudos!