"Thursday Kinda Day..."

"Thursday Kinda Day..."

A Poem by Chris
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yep

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“Thursday Kinda Day…”

 

Major puppy dog eyes being batted here...


leap, leap...duh,


which way did she go duh,

which way did she ...go...this way?!?


Leap leap...Here?!?

leap leap...


There...Where?!?

Awwww man…  WHERE?!?


H’lo H’lo…

H’lo….

Can’t ya come out’n play?

Awwwwwww cooooooooooooooommmmme ooonnn

Comeoncomeoncomeon


Leap Leap Leap…


Wagwagwag…bodybodybodywag


- oh the things we do for attention… sigh -


Leapleapsomersault - leap …ouch

Rollroll…leap

PLOP!! HAH-a-HAH-a-HAH-a-HAH


…sheesh already…

'boutdamntime!

 

Chris

 

© 2013 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
feel free AFTER you think on it...
there is ALWAYS something within the lines when you think on them ya know? Still, it somehow doesn't feel like Pulitzer material though - chuckling here

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Wondering .. just wondering, you understand.. if maybe the man's doing the batting of eye.lashes and playing the fool, wanting, needing, to be noticed. Anything for attention and, why not. Love, love, love the happy ending, whether man or beast or just hope. Smiling at the fun, sideways glance at the charm, and knowing there's a tale behind the words. Thanks for sharing, as ever.

'…sheesh already… 'boutdamntime! '

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Hell yes it's the Man OR Woman or both
emmajoy

11 Years Ago

It could never be a woman, will tell you why. Laughing, chuckling, giggling - she'd just lie down an.. read more
Chris

11 Years Ago

You might be right... will await for other "voices" to speak up... chuckling here.
There should be a "Puzzler Prize" for Poetry, don't you think, Chris? I mean, come on, dogs and people... they both want that attention from the alphas. So, here I am again, over on my back, tail wagging and hoping there's more butt sniffing than ear biting. Of course I am still thinking about it but if I do that too long I'll get a headache and it's starting off to be such a nice morning - why would I want a headache (except perhaps for contrast). I'm not the target audience here. I'm gender neutered (intentional pun). But I still fetch sticks on command. I have training, don't cha know, huh? As for the overall impact of the piece, I'd say it opens to the themesong of the old TV serial, "Tombstone Territory." Goes something ilke this, "
Whistle me up a memory
Whistle me back where I want to be
Whistle a tune that will carry meTo Tombstone
Territory
...
"[1]

** The WC advert, just below, as I read this: "DogEar Publishing"
All in all a frisky little thing! :)

100 bowing wows

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[1] source: http://www.lyricsondemand.com/tvthemes/tombstoneterritorylyrics.html


Posted 11 Years Ago


-smiling- Very well done my friend! Multiplicity for a reader is a wonderful thing... Is it me chasing my own tale and heart or Achilles and Hector racing around the house while I'm gone? I love it... and they're too stingy with that Pulitzer thingy anyway.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

I think it is all of us in the end... ya know...
Very upbeat, sir. Nice work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


but it does feel like.." Chris"...have to say we have had several bassett hounds that would fit right in to your loving description..Laury

Posted 11 Years Ago


miss you

I don't have a dog, but I've been around them enough to know you captured the moment of their excitement perfectly. Truly unique and special. Just like you. xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sounds like Fido enjoyed his walk in the park Chris ?

Creative and fun, always a healthy combination !!



Posted 11 Years Ago



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Chris

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