"Thursday Kinda Day..."

yep

“Thursday Kinda Day…”

 

Major puppy dog eyes being batted here...

leap, leap...duh,

which way did she go duh,

which way did she ...go...this way?!?

Leap leap...Here?!?

leap leap...

There...Where?!?

Awwww man…  WHERE?!?

H’lo H’lo…

H’lo….

Can’t ya come out’n play?

Awwwwwww cooooooooooooooommmmme ooonnn

Comeoncomeoncomeon

Leap Leap Leap…

Wagwagwag…bodybodybodywag

- oh the things we do for attention… sigh -

Leapleapsomersault - leap …ouch

Rollroll…leap

PLOP!! HAH-a-HAH-a-HAH-a-HAH

…sheesh already…

'boutdamntime!

 

Chris

 

Author's Note

feel free AFTER you think on it...
there is ALWAYS something within the lines when you think on them ya know? Still, it somehow doesn't feel like Pulitzer material though - chuckling here

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Delightful! Such a picture of pure, blissful impatience for something so simple as attention and mutual adoration, and maybe, thereby, validation.

Definitely NOT and Arthur Dent kind of Thursday… :D

[Chris]

Chuckling here...

[MomzillaNC]

:D :D right there with ya!

[ANTO]

I miss my dog Chris - your descriptive powers allowed me to see yours as sure as if it was here in my house - thank you for that
anto

[Chris]

"...woof..."

[ANTO]

I know...! Thats what I was gonna say Chris :P

[Corset]

giggle, this was silly, but you captured the essence of unconditional love completely, puppies and dogs are Gods you know...just spelled bassackwards, I love my dog completely, she is ever there when I need her and unassuming, undemanding, always by my side, except right now, hey where the hell is she? damn, almost always by my side. grrrrrrrrrrr

[Chris]

uh huh... yep.

[Lourisa]

Your poem made me smile and made me feel tired at the same time. Keeping up the puppy dog antics will surely be tiresome for both pup and master. Great metaphor, Chris, I enjoyed this poem.

[Lyn Anderson]

I personally get the impression of a man feeling like a puppy chasing after someone - but very effective whether it be just what it is or more.

[Chris]

there is a puppy dog in everyone at times - regargless of age... doesn't take too jaundiced of an eye to notice it either.

[Mary]

That's exactly my take. Not a literal dog, but a man excited and trying to capture the attention of someone alluring.

[Chris]

"Dogs" chase "cats" until the the feline turns and catches the him she decides to want.

[jane7z]

Wow love the use of language to evoke sounds throughout this work

[Chris]

chuckling here... nice of you to pause with me, hope you come back.

[Cryingkate]

LOl Chris,
I'd ask how things have been, it's been a while but I see things have been going to the dogs for you lately.
Well I'm happy for you, and I'm happy you have written about my life too.
These waggish tails and spinnettes catch my own tail creatures and squatter right lap deeds can be the best things in our life.
Fun and nice job...

[Rachelle]

Devoted loyalty of a heart to the alpha of its pack...
But then, which is which?
And who leads?
Homo sapiens or Canis lupus familiaris?

[Seashell]

The mind boggles... And giggles...so that's kinda damed good right ?
Fun write
Thank you x