"Timeless..."

a Monday's Thought

"Timeless..."

Moments are so short

when its your eyes

that were full...

as the tomorrows ...ended.

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Latifa]

powerful poem chris much enjoyed

[Chris]

I want to visit your thoughts today... we get so busy with life sometimes

[Latifa]

the doors are open wide for you chris

[Lydia Shutter]

Hopes and dreams are sometimes extinguished all too soon. The imagery here is stunning, Chris. Lydi*

[Chris]

It's living that stuns... what you survive...

[Frieda P]

Can I just bask in your words so I might absorb some of your wisdom, I brought coffee. :)

[Chris]

I put a shawl on the chair back for you... it's chilly here this morning Freida. I look forward to hearing your thoughts.

[Frieda P]

It's quite cold here too, I'm just an empty cup this morning Chris, waiting for you to fill it up...

[Ruth]

Sometimes seems as though time is indeed linear and those tomorrow's call all too soon...as always...mesmerising Chris xx

[Chris]

The sun on your shoulder still casts "shadows". Coffee is good today, Hi Poppy.

[Emerald Seas]

This is so sorrowful for such an economy of words. Powerful!

[Chris]

Morning Sirrah... coffee works.

[Emerald Seas]

Smiling... Enjoying mine in a moment of quiet...
Good morning, Chris

[Horizons]

Few words bigger impact. Thoughts're true & i even read it again and again to know the depth of the "Timeless" and you've well penned up this poem or title with the great thought. What a splendid piece of creativity you just raised with. Well done, i loved your this creation of words. So much sentiments're flown over the few words. An emotional... A much emotional piece you made.

[Chris]

Hi man... sometimes every word is lode bearing. Thanks for coming by.

[emmajoy]

Chris, dear friend, this has so few words but to me, it seems full of sadness. It's as if the emotions you saw reflected just faded. I want to turn on the sun for y ou.. truly do.

[Chris]

Em...every word carried its own weight. The sun was there too... as I saw my "shadow".

[J. J. Nightingale]

sigh..so many endings .. before there's time............................

J.

[Chris]

Jazz, I do so hope you're doing well. This was my "shadow", the sun was here still. I need to visit your writing again... See you there.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I am breathing some, and wishing and dreaming more... see you there .. :)

[Chris]

its good seeing you Jazz...

[J. J. Nightingale]

Thank you Chris .. the day isn't quite right, if I can't read YOU ...

[Chris]

awwwwwwwwwwww....