"9-12-2013"

I do use a journal... seldom change, scratch, or delete

"9-12-2013"

Summer's end ~

  crystals' sparkles

  dancing rainbows

  swaying branches

  ~ lazy air.

Laying here ~

  I taste the sun

  in your words,

  See the world.

  Feel each breath.

I live the dream

  within my eyes

  knowing ...knowing...

  I'm touching you.

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

when the first hint of falls reminds me that summer will end and winter will follow i get a little tense...your poem reminds me of what a warm and quiet wonder fall days can bring...the journal thing drew me to this; that and the title; a day after 9/11....i am glad this was a day such as you describe...its pretty special to express oneself poetically and be satisfied with it in its pure form...nicely done.
E.

[Chris]

Again, welcome to this place. Come by anytime.

[Angi]

Oh Chris. This is beautiful. I love to see that other's use real paper and pencils to write. I have kept all of my drafts of my poems. The words of your poem are floating on soft air. Just lovely. Angi~

[Chris]

I use fountain pens and numerous types and colors of ink... mood ya know.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Each word.. a 'touching' gift .. beautiful and warm..

Wow, you actually do write... :)

Thanks for listening .. and for sharing..

Jazz xx

[Rita L. Sev]

"I taste the sun in your words..." - Such joy in this line; your images are always so clear and full.

Beautiful penmanship, too! :)

[Chris]

Cursive ...the "lost" skill - chuckling here

[Renée]

oh Chris it is your handwriting ! As beautiful as the thoughts you express... ( :

[Chris]

I actually DO write...

[Renée]

giggling ( :

[Emerald Seas]

This is simple, profound, and very moving. A beautiful write, my friend. I hope life is being kind to you :)

[shallimarRose]

Chris I feel this today above all other days more then you could ever imagine..

You know me and I know you have a certain gift ..to feel...and know... and care...

xo shall