"Walking Through A Field ...of thoughts."

A Thursday thought

 

"Walking Through A Field ...of thoughts."

 

I came by to pause again
…and taste the sun...
strange how the scents change to suit
the where and when we are
each who we are
how we …are
and so few seem to notice.
 
Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[olla]

we are often told to "stop and smell the roses".. but you are right.. few of us really do except on occasion.. or perhaps in time.. is it an aquired taste.. one that must be cultivated.. and maybe we need some one.. or thing.. to nudge us into that cultivation..

[SyberRose]

An intoxicating poem of thoughts... as a euphoria feeling is coming over me in this sunny field...Rose

[Chris]

Cornflower blue skyways with cotton candy filaments... and John Wayne echoes of "Yo Pilgrim..." and soft silly smiles. Such fields of thoughts and think on the stirring of pollen and dust motes swirling and the tastes of ...well that's another poem.

[SyberRose]

haa...yes save it for a rainy day when dandelion seeds are blowing in the wind

[Chris]

THAT's "the answer my friend,"is Blowin' in the Wind..."

[Kenneth The Poet]

Life is fleeting and that's likely why we keep moving.

[Chris]

least til we reach an age where stillness means they know you must be up to no good.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Is this to say... you must stop and elaborate on life... and count to ten... and feel what you're walking into... Open the eyes a bit and focus... there's more to life than just waking up and going to bed... and the dread of work for the average Joe... Relax... take a breath...the O2 levels are not going to get any better... enjoy them while you still have time...

[emmajoy]

Some notice but don't see, some see and don't care .. others do see, absorb and treasure - believe me. You always make this reviewer think that little bit further.

'... …and taste the sun... ' what a beautiful thought!

[sharonlee]

Breathing deeply... thank you for the gentle reminder.

[David Scott]

You hit on a point of philosophy here...
Reality is exactly what we decide for it be.
"scents change to suit", indeed.
I like walking with you. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

It's true. Not many folks notice. Great poem Chris

[Ruth]

And yet, there are those who notice...more than that, they feel their notice xx

[J. J. Nightingale]

Hummm.. This seems as if you are disappointed in us... ?

"the scents change to suit the where and when we are" ...... ?

"so few seem to notice." .. ..

Scents ..? .. moods..tones.. and temperatures .... aroma

All the "Hazy Shades of Winter's" ... I get this one ! .. sigh

I think more than a few notice ..

Jazz