"Walking Through A Field ...of thoughts."

A Thursday thought

 

"Walking Through A Field ...of thoughts."

 

I came by to pause again
…and taste the sun...
strange how the scents change to suit
the where and when we are
each who we are
how we …are
and so few seem to notice.
 
Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[olla]

we are often told to "stop and smell the roses".. but you are right.. few of us really do except on occasion.. or perhaps in time.. is it an aquired taste.. one that must be cultivated.. and maybe we need some one.. or thing.. to nudge us into that cultivation..

[Heather]

its those moments when we stop being so busy with who we are, and be one with what is around us... that is magical. This made me smile!

[Muse]

I have noticed Chris...

Each new day creates a reason to smile
you walk again
only to pause for awhile

I have listened...

Each drop of rain is bittersweet
you pause again
to feel the earth covet your feet

I have carried you...

Each day I blew the wind to carry your ship
you inspire me
wipes the tears from an old man's lip

[Lisa Victoria]

Very beautiful....made me pause...to think...
Love this:)

Lisa

[Dye]

"the where and when we are
each who we are
how we …are
and so few seem to notice."

Some never do take the time to notice, it is a shame.

[Chris]

Yes ...it is. People miss a lot, thanks for pausing with me. Hope you return.

By every step we change... time changes, we change, and we "are".

Lovely my friend.

- Elisa

[Corset]

I wonder how the sun tastes, do you think it citrus like lemons? Kind of tart that tickles your nose and clinch your eyes into a smile, i love the sun...and lemons, I bet that's how. Loved the "feel" and pause of this Chris. as always..

[lei]

what a beautiful thoughts, Chris. yes I paused and thought of this...

[Chris]

Catching our collective breaths ...

[Tom]

You are who you are ! If folk don't like that, tough! Who are they to judge ?

A thoughtfully penned, self-reflecting prose!

[Chris]

Interesting thought flow you left...

[Distantview123]

We should take time to pause for thought...within our own thoughts, and the thoughts of others. Nicely expressed poetic piece. ~ Robert.

[Chris]

Nice of you to pause and leave some thoughts - hope you come back.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You're the one that kept me grounded here, Chris...and I'll always be grateful for that.

" I came by to pause again
…and taste the sun..."

I feel I could swim in the euphoria of your words! Such a delight, Chris...