"When The Echoes Cry..."

 

I found Ken Simms - "Passing Iona" this morning.

 

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Ken-Simm/1188151/

 

 

 

"When The Echoes Cry..."

 

I came by to retouch the Magyk...

 

Your flow drew me,

held me

lifted me

let me breathe.

 

I needed that.

 

Chris

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mehak Mushtaq]

An amazing way of speaking about someone's work (if I've not got it wrong).

[Chris]

You weren't wrong in any way Mehak... and THAT was the intent too.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Then, you have done an amazing work here, sir.

[Chris]

so did Ken Simm...

[Chris]

I do hope you listen to his!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I read his poem too. He's an amazing writer. :)

[sasha]

The poem like a nocturne, thank you, Chris.

[Chris]

It was nice of you to pause with me... Thank you Sasha.

[TL Boehm]

Wow. Your response to Ken's poem is beautiful on its own but I too read that piece a bit ago - it is inspiring.
Well penned response.

[Corset]

You do the same with your wanderings, mutual breaths allowed here I think.

[Rhianne Ney]

:D Nice lines. As always I can read "you" along the lines. Thanks for the poem

[Holly Mason]

...ever the friend...
lovely thoughts of inspiration
thank you fine sir

[Rita L. Sev]

A beautiful grace shared in gratitude of inspiration...

[sharonlee]

Potent thoughts in passing. Nicely shared Chris.

[Angi]

Passing Iona touched me, too. Ken's work makes me sigh, scratch my head, read again and then sigh again. This was awesome, Chris! I agree with your lovely poem so much. Angi~