"Philosophy 102..."

"Philosophy 102..."

A Poem by Chris
"

"...another day older..."

"

I found a "thought" on Life by Anxia

 

"Life"

 

That thought led to...

 

"Philosophy 102..."

 (senyru)

 

Your 'touch' filled my thoughts,

and the more I paused I found

...more to pause about.

 

Some make their own hells

from even the heavens found

- by being themselves.

 

Chris

 

© 2013 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
Visit Anxia - good thoughts there.

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I very much agree. Being yourself can bring great things, but also devastating situations as well. The world won't like who you are. There are bullies, and the media, and television and magazines all telling you to be something else. To be fake. And when you resist that, you become strong and confident and crate a heaven for yourself inside of your mind. It's wonderful, yet crushing at the same time.

Very nice poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I echo olla's thoughts left here.



Posted 11 Years Ago


I find that often the reverse is also true.. there are those who will find heaven despite the hell around them.. and that too is because of who they are..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Ah, perhaps that should make up "Philosophy 103..."
olla

11 Years Ago

smilimg here..
i lykd d last stanza some make their own hells
from even the heavens found
-by being themselves
it does hold true!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

I hope you pause ...often, and find thoughts to hold within.
i will come back again for the next lesson and the next :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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