what our ears dreamed. yes. This is a fitting poem. Poetry is felt by the writer and heard by the reader so much more than just "seen" in so many cases. Words have cadence, music of their own. Wonderful reminder of that. Thank you
The last stanza sums up this whole thing perfectly and it's such a beautiful idea and image. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and indeed, reading this aloud makes it just that little bit more special.
I've been out of the loop on this site but I'm glad to be back and reading your work!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Welcome back and thanks for pausing here and for your thoughts.
Chris, I am sorry it has taken me so long to get to one of your pieces. I have finally figured this site out and I have been doing a lot of RR's. (I am thinking of turning that off for a bit and just floating around) I just saw your name pop on my feed and wanted to get to you! Now, on this piece. I often read poems aloud. I can get a feel for the flow, the words get inside my head better. Then, if the words are right, images and feelings come along for the ride. Those are the best ones. Totally agree with you! Angi~
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Its nice seeing you Angi...thank you for your thoughts...
Some times, we must tell
Aloud..
My heart stopped.. I needed .. I wanted ..I lost
And scents of flowers upon graves..
The smooth and rough of days
Blue skies, scars and dreamy sounds inside-out..
Some times.. we must tell aloud
So many echoes from there.. to hear.
Wow ... Jazz x
You penned the voices of those "ghostlets" well.
Yes, poetry can feel like the answer to our ears dreaming. You twist the kaleidoscope her a bit for a new vision of the written word.
I shall have to start reading aloud to myself. I actually do this with several writers because it helps me feel their work so much better.
Thank you for the sounds of your thoughts.
"Life is a terminal disease." All the doctors have basically told me so.
"Life is an adventure... Pain, well you deal. Thanks for being here. 06/21/2020
I'm back and working on. I've been.. more..