Life holds the rhythm -
and its beat we follow
as the flow takes us to EVERY where
that our eyes might touch
what our ears ...dreamed....
... I enjoyed this stanza. Very truly penned. Yeah.. We should live nicely with love and peace. Thanks for penning the coolio write .. It's a very great message you shuttled to look the life in a very beautiful way to live through the poem. Keep on!
Well check out my "And the colored girls sing" if you get a chance. that is what I will be reading t.. read moreWell check out my "And the colored girls sing" if you get a chance. that is what I will be reading tomorrow night.
Really amazing. I love this. I love everything I've read so far, but I do believe this is my favorite now. 'know a tear in anger, despair in a smile'... The contrast you draw here in this piece really makes a person think. And appreciate. Words voice for us the ability to feel, to think and to understand. The pen truly is mightier than the sword.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
It is so long as we breathe and live after its passing... thanks "Light"man
Words do have their own energy. They can lift one on high, or they can bring one down low. If we live in the words - the dream words - perhaps we can make the dreams come true. This reminds me of the power of positive thinking, and that whatever you're looking for is what you shall find. We are the creators of our own reality, and it's up to us whether we live the dream or settle for something less.
"to weep and laugh
til you feel the sounds
of a frown
of a hope"
These are words to greet each new day by, Chris. I mentally envision what it is I am striving for. It gives me the exuberance of a child, making my load seem much lighter.
This was beautiful. It really just reminded me of how much I love words and what they do to my mind and how they make me feel emotionally. It makes my passion for the written word grow fonder. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I'm glad you chose this one to pause with...Hi, I'm Chris.
11 Years Ago
Ya it was wonderful. And I'm Dominique (Dome-uh-nique) lol people always pronounce it wrong lol read moreYa it was wonderful. And I'm Dominique (Dome-uh-nique) lol people always pronounce it wrong lol
"Life is a terminal disease." All the doctors have basically told me so.
"Life is an adventure... Pain, well you deal. Thanks for being here. 06/21/2020
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