"Ways..."

more to think on

"Ways..."

 

Ways to be,

ways to feel

 

...so many "ways"...

 

to breathe

to prove

to live

 

see        be seen

BE all you can

 

just

 

to     let go,     end

to leave

 

and in the dying -

it's always a lil more with each pause,

that each I fades

 

I's

...ants and gnats...

wondering where all the IT's are at.

Highs and lows

and ever the 'tweens -

'til

 

ways and more

ways

and ever more ...stills.

 

Chris

 

 

 

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Aiden]

I enjoy your form. It is unique, expressive, and enjoyable. Thank you.

[Rita L. Sev]

Truth! So many ways to do all, and all are fascinating. I often wonder where all the IT's are at... I enjoyed this!

[icelandicblue]

I like the construct a lot and the staccato placement of words. I'm unsure about this:

see be seen

BE all you can

I think they are a bit cliche. I love the rest though- we amble to and fro and hope we only wobble rather than fall. There are infinite choices and a finite amount of time.

[Chris]

see be seen were meant with a breath break and thought pause in between and yet NEEDED to be seen together. As for cliche-ing, that too was meant because those particular cliches alone serve to tie in others' expectations (which of course ARE yet another way) to my own comment of the next lines of thought to the overall theme - expected "ways". Least that was the intent.

[Baby Ricochet]

Life is full of choices. Good piece

[J. J. Nightingale]

I don't always know which way is best..
The choices are less and less
I want to hold on, I want to let go
I want to forget, and remember how
She smiled, he smiled .. and then
I truly don't know which way I'll end.

It's Today .. again

And someone is saying good-bye..in their own way.

J.

[Michael G.]

Lots of ways... until.
Good thoughts.

[Sunni Davis]

I love the way this flows! And your words carry such powerful impact. Very, very nice!

[Tricia O'Brien]

I want to say so much, but I'm tripping over myself at the moment.
I dig Chris
Trish-

[Ruth]

The complete process! You thrill, intrigue and deliver impact, constantly ♥

[Chris]

you're biased ...but nicely so.

[Ruth]

♥