"Ways..."

more to think on

"Ways..."

 

Ways to be,

ways to feel

 

...so many "ways"...

 

to breathe

to prove

to live

 

see        be seen

BE all you can

 

just

 

to     let go,     end

to leave

 

and in the dying -

it's always a lil more with each pause,

that each I fades

 

I's

...ants and gnats...

wondering where all the IT's are at.

Highs and lows

and ever the 'tweens -

'til

 

ways and more

ways

and ever more ...stills.

 

Chris

 

 

 

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Enigma]

poised between the 'proper', 'established' way and one's own unique and personal way - "to breathe, to prove, to live". Thought-provoking. A pleasure to read.

[Chris]

Thank you for pausing with me and for the thoughts you left.

[Frieda P]

Great attitude in this write, how do I acquire one...just lovely Chris.

[Chris]

"tudes" are earned and yet often given.

[Frieda P]

True, done both, wise man....

[Holly Mason]

if everyone handled things the same way...robots?maybe, but even they can have programming changed
enjoy life the way that we as an individual choose
but enjoy it non the less*)
now which way did you go?
thank you fine sir

[Chris]

Good seeing you again Holly...

[Acucena G.]

ways to compliment a good poet , its beautiful , and the way you worked the word "way" was incredible , keep it up

[Talkless]

Very constructive

[Claire Twinn]

You manage to be both deep and whimsical here, for me it has a fun feel telling me to just go out there and enjoy!

[Salar Majak]

so many ways hu?
but if you really think about it you see that all these ways lead to one thing, that is why they are called ways, to actually lead to a result.
do we find a million way to DO one thing?
doesn't it makes us, the human race, kind of desperate for results?
do i make any sense right now or did i just ruin this?

[Chris]

you did fine Sal... and thanks for the pause and thoughts.

[Salar Majak]

It was a pleasure

[Renée]

won't allow me to express what I want ) : so I shall count the ways ( :