"Clouds.."
A Poem by
Chris
...silver linings...
"Clouds..."
Sometimes I just want to reach out
and tightly hug you
just
really - just
because I think you KNOW
why ...I want to.
Chris
© 2013 Chris
Author's Note
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Reviews
Nicely done. It's short, sweet, and a piece that is memorable. A wonderful poem. Quite wonderful.
---RbG
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
thank you for pausing and for the thoughts
A very tender sentiment in this one, Chris. Irresistable.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A very tender sentiment in this one, Chris. Irresistable.
Short and to the point. Good one
Posted 11 Years Ago
Short and to the point. Good one
A hug is truly underestimated. Our flesh is an organ, but it's so much more than that when it touches another's. The feeling of arms wrapping around you when all seems lost brings it's own sort of light going beyond the flesh and bone, penetrating deeply into our being and bringing on the dawn. Excellent job taking something that seems simple and giving people reason to stop... and think about it.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A hug is truly underestimated. Our flesh is an organ, but it's so much more than that when it touches another's. The feeling of arms wrapping around you when all seems lost brings it's own sort of light going beyond the flesh and bone, penetrating deeply into our being and bringing on the dawn. Excellent job taking something that seems simple and giving people reason to stop... and think about it.
A big hug, long and sincere, does wonders for the soul!
Posted 11 Years Ago
A big hug, long and sincere, does wonders for the soul!
Sometimes earthly just won't due
And we reach beyond ourselves
To hold onto..
"I've looked at clouds from both sides now
From up and down, and still somehow
It's cloud illusions I recall
I really don't know clouds at all"
It's never to late to reach .. Thank you Chris
Posted 11 Years Ago
Sometimes earthly just won't due
And we reach beyond ourselves
To hold onto..
"I've looked at clouds from both sides now
From up and down, and still somehow
It's cloud illusions I recall
I really don't know clouds at all"
It's never to late to reach .. Thank you Chris
(((hugs))) are terribly undervalued sometimes...
Posted 11 Years Ago
(((hugs))) are terribly undervalued sometimes...
Yes, we know, just loverly.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Yes, we know, just loverly.
It's the same reason I think as to why I want to squeeze the Pillbury Dough Boy. I think we've all wished we could reach out and touch the clouds.
Posted 11 Years Ago
It's the same reason I think as to why I want to squeeze the Pillbury Dough Boy. I think we've all wished we could reach out and touch the clouds.
Simply...
No words can add glitter to what is already perfect...you blow my mind xoxo
Posted 11 Years Ago
Simply...
No words can add glitter to what is already perfect...you blow my mind xoxo
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