"Clouds.."

"Clouds.."

A Poem by Chris
"

...silver linings...

"

"Clouds..."

 

Sometimes I just want to reach out

and tightly hug you

just

really - just

because I think you KNOW

why ...I want to.

 

Chris

© 2013 Chris


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Sweet and nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a soft with a touch of vulnerability.
Peaceful..

Wherever you may be, I hope you are walking on clouds, Chris. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


so good piece :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


so good piece :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


i feel this a lot...with my significant other...so many things about her make me want to do this...and actually we hug each other often...that is a good thing...this poem is also a "good thing"!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Thanks for pausing Jacob...
I can see the 'silver linings' through this piece in my own way.
Thanks for offering the freedom.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Good to see you my friend.
zainul

11 Years Ago

Sense of guilt always haunt me for not seeing you too often.
I become enriched whenever I can .. read more
so little said but so much captured i prefer poetry of this scale even though i don't write short ones such as this i still enjoy reading them. good write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Thanks for coming by and leaving some thoughts...
Simplicity is so beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I know you aren't speaking of clouds, but you convey your message like a cloud, free, light and sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

thank you for pausing...and for the thoughts
This poem reminds me of the little kids who always want to jump around or ride on the clouds. It's like the older version of that kid who still wants the same thing just in a different way and they still can't entirely explain why the clouds hold such mystery. But there really is just something about clouds, isn't there?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Perhaps Clouds are Rorschach Art for the everyone.

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Lansing, MI



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