1.  "Dawn's Whisper..."

1. "Dawn's Whisper..."

A Chapter by Chris

 

"Dawn's Whisper..."

 

I don't know that my thoughts

can echo that softly,

so clearly warm and with gentle touch.

 

When each moment so quickly passes

and is yet so tightly held within,

I believe in dreams again.

 

Where does my smile begin

and my heart end ...within

- the touch of your fingertips.

 

Such was the breath

so longingly held...

your exhale as we kissed.

 

Chris



© 2013 Chris


Author's Note

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wow! Some real romantic stuff Chris. Nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Its the unposted pieces that melt eyes... and glow in the dark. Chuckling here
I'm reminded of mornings when the sun rises and the sky is stroked in shades of rose and the white clouds are lit gold from below. Indeed, your words are like a sweet whisper - soft, warm, and gentle. Thank you.

Linda Marie

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

The process of trying something new - to fit the way some others here set up chapters as just one wr.. read more
chris you work magic your basically a magician architect of words haha great stuff i can't even express the emotions your words stir up :]

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love can make this happen - make us believe in dreams again. The whole piece is truly lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Glad you paused...
Oh la la... very thoughtful and warm!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thought provoking, that sense of feeling, an actual touch soothes us all, well done, good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


such wonderful unique work. Must be read more than once.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Such a wonderful unique work. really must be read more than once.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

thank you for comng by and pausing with mine.
I am left breathless...there is only tender waves throughout your work, words are your heart, deliverance your gift, I can only read in awe. Love and light dear heart xox

Posted 11 Years Ago



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