"A Simple Pause..."

"A Simple Pause..."

A Poem by Chris
"

speaking with a friend... life happens

"

 

"A Simple Pause..."

 

What is the color

of tomorrow

before the sun rises

and my eyes open to

yesterday again...

 

Chris

© 2013 Chris


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Chris
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Where there is no light there is no colour. Here is light.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it is the color of laughter carried on a wisp of sea breeze when the velvet night is just beginning to mist into the promise of morning coffee after spindrift and moonbeams have glazed the tips of mermaid fins.. one can only see it for a fleeting moment before the shades of yesterday bleach the brilliance from it.. one can only keep it fresh by not counting the tick and tocks of the crocodile clocks..

Posted 11 Years Ago


The best pauses ever... only you can pause like no other.
Thank you.

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


You pose a very intriguing question... getting in that Zen state of mind.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The shades of all the yesterdays
melt and merge into the hue of today
melt and merge
mixing
all the colors of the universe
into.... grey... SLG
xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Hi Shar...
Well, what color is tomorrow if your eyes open to yesterday? It almost sounds like a repetitive circle of being caught in the past. Kinda like Bill Murray in Ground Hog Day, the same moment lived over and over... When do you get to pause on today? Just a thought... Pausing to reflect now :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Emerald Seas

11 Years Ago

Pleeeeaase.... You are far from the realm of insane
Chris

11 Years Ago

I have never professed "sanity" - just lived it.
Chris

11 Years Ago

somewhat
Sounds dark to me, but maybe it could be burgundy like fine wine or hope...

Posted 11 Years Ago


J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

:) .......................................... >>>
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh, Chris thanks for that hon! ;-) You just made me think of something....ha
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Taking on three feisty ladies... you are a brave soul Chris.
This is quite a riddle you've posed for us here...is it beige? ;-)

Keeping our eyes open to yesterday is quite often the only way we can know tomorrow...thanks for allowing me to pause upon your page.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

:-D It's my favorite of the neutrals...
Chris

11 Years Ago

so now you're being "neutral" on me? sigh... Was "Eroticism..." that bad too?
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

God damn it...I have to go...I always love talking to you and now I'm being cut short. Oh, I never .. read more
Tomorrow is elusive
We can write "tomorrow"
We can speak of "tomorrow"
Plan on it ..
But we can not see it
or know it's secret colors ..
until it becomes yesterday

As usual, I don't know what I am saying .. but I am trying to understand You ... J.

Posted 11 Years Ago


J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

Maybe I should have said "Ruby Red" .. as a color for tomorrow .. like those magical slippers Judy c.. read more
Chris

11 Years Ago

hmmmmmmmm... now THAT is a good thought.
J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

:)........................

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