"A Simple Pause..."

"A Simple Pause..."

A Poem by Chris
"

speaking with a friend... life happens

"

 

"A Simple Pause..."

 

What is the color

of tomorrow

before the sun rises

and my eyes open to

yesterday again...

 

Chris

© 2013 Chris


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Chris
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It made me smile, don't know why but it just did....
Past and future coincide in a moment called 'Present'
It's a little masterpiece... It's simple yet intricate... Its brief yet stretches over time itself.... Thank you for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

thank you for pausing... and the thoughts shared.
Irfan Bashir Shah

11 Years Ago

Thank YOU for writing!
I have'nt seen tomorrow, but i know the color of tomorrow, it's a "light",
that' makes us bright every-night, so keep your today good, tomorrow'll technically be good as a color of new flash light.
very nice. I liked it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


There are times when only you can choose .. this is it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The colour of tomorrow full of promise it should be bright and affirming.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

thanks Moon
That's beautiful Chris, what color would you wish it to be?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

What is the color of hope?
Corset

11 Years Ago

I believe that to be purple my friend.
Brief yet powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dream state - the land of possibilities ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

True - if only we could orchestrate our wishes before slumber takes hold
Chris

11 Years Ago

now THAT is on heck of a wish!
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11 Years Ago

;)
That's really pretty man.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

Chuckling here... I NEEDED that...thanks man!
what is the color of tomorrow? Mmmm... This gave me a pause....
The color of tomorrow is uncertain unless we walk through it and paint it all the way.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

OR... it could be what our eyes saw it would be in the dreams we had the nights before. Dreams are .. read more
can't let tomorrow out of my sight.

i do this...look back a lot, probably because much of what is ahead seems so bleak.

i like this....my philosophy is "less is more"

and this becomes "more"

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Chris
Chris

Lansing, MI



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