"A Simple Pause..."

speaking with a friend... life happens

 

"A Simple Pause..."

 

What is the color

of tomorrow

before the sun rises

and my eyes open to

yesterday again...

 

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Renée]

Such a tender thought ( :

[Ruth]

"Feel free"...I sit humbled by such beauty and have nothing else to say, for I am sure you feel my adoration for your words x

[Nestor Gonzalez]

short and sweet,you've said more with 17 words than i ever could with a million

[Chris]

and your million is just as important and real ...and worth being told and read - to me.

[SyberRose]

yes makes one think Chris...when alone tomorrow is always like yesterday...so much said in such few words...SyberRose

[Reeti]

Isn't it strange that our minds keep continuously listing to the past or the future at times? How simply and curtly your verse is put, and yet, the meaning we can contrive from it is incredible! We desire the past for we desire what we don't possess. Most of our lives, or as much as humanly possible, we need the "simple pause" to stay in the present moment. Thank you for writing this and sharing it here! =)

[Ayvid N]

A very clever write! Very deep.

[Neville]

A delightful little gem indeed & thoroughly enjoyed... N

[Mary Christabel George]

Just a few lines but made us think so deep...

[Denham Cole]

A poem of deceptive depth. Koan like...
I like it very much.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

blossoming springing from the turning of the mind, the silent meditation of the sun's rising and falling in brief, profound lines.