"A Note..."

So many, many lines to read

- between -

aren't there?

 

 

"A Note..."

 

"Hi...", it's just me ...again

no one ..special

nothing ...nothing new.

 

Just me, "I wanted..."

way too much - always too much

 

I guess that IS the way of things -

everythings, anythings ...always too much

of something - cost, paid or due

 

me wanting ...you... wanting

everybody wanting -

"To say..."

- seems words just get in the way

as we each trip, stumble, even fall

to our ...heavenly hell - hell-fully-heaven

our     doom     our     being so found

     our     rememberings     in the night

          our      tears     have so much meaning

ours     hours     too much     meaning

sometimes they're right here - within

     me     us     the words

-arethewords -     surround EACH word...

big, little, meaning-full

meaningless

words     begging

said, heard, known ...given

forgottenrememberedand sometimesyouwishyouhadn't ..spoken

ever breathed, tried...

because you risked too much, too little,

too everything you knew

for what you didn't really know at all

- understand ..at all.

 

"I hope..." no, I don't DO that - any more

anymore     ever     more    evermore

forever     forevermores     that's what we always risk - isn't it?

- the empty nights

- the wish-full days

the lil things that edge and border our existence

..the thoughts we hold so tight inside...

 

"...Everything..." - what's it all mean,

what DID it all ...mean?

What's any thing mean when you feel

this     way

hurt-full?     Numb?     so empty -

even God is crying.

It's the silence that fills me ...now.

 

The silence - life...fading

"...IS going - well."

"Take care."

 

Chris

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[elizasexybeth]

I do feel god has to cry upon this manic world which he has created and left to our own devices. looking for words to speak can bring you to a halt whilst creating words on paper is so much easier
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[Chris]

Hi again...

[Lupus Kaos]

Nice one. I liked it. I read first the... Note and then the rest. Good poem, and the line "even god is crying. It's the silence that fills me...now" is a very beautiful one.

[Chris]

Thank you, I appreciate you're pausing and leaving thoughts behind... hope to see you again.

[Kristina Moulaison]

Love this. The words inside our heads that we mean versus what we actually say. So well done!

[Indie Skreet]

highly creative, intelligent and oh too true. I'm glad you brought your attention to me and I very much look forward to reading more.

[Hayley]

Excellent flow. I love how you really delve into each word so we feel them and understand them. Expressed perfectly.

[Chris]

I'm glad you came... your thoughts are always welcomed.

[Ruth]

Chris, I am tearful..sincerely, you are a master at evoking the emotions...
I need say no more xox

[Holly Mason]

this is interesting even God is crying...love it thanks for the write

[J. J. Nightingale]

I've lost so very much
In between so many lines
Pausing with hope
At all the wrong doors ..
Reaching beyond me
And leaving and then left
Always alone ..

The pain that can't be seen, never hurts any one .. else

Monday .. who knew .

Take Care .. breathe on and on .. because .. .. .. J.

[Chris]

You leave so much of you behind... thanks hon.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Forever and Always .. You are Welcome .. x

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sometimes i worry for the next breath .. I can't find it, I feel Me going .. panic sets in, because there is so much left unsaid .. like "I love you" .. "I really care" .. and "Please forgive Me" .. all those sins of omission, ya know .. Then by some miracle, breath .. and I feel like I've been given a little MORE time, to love and to be loved ..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is a big down fall of us humans, we spend so much time reaching for more and what we don't have that life slips away and so does the important things in our life.

[Chris]

I wonder if you realized what you were walking into when you opened this one to see? Thanks for pausing AND leaving your thoughts.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I never think about it... I like to dive in and get lost in the words to see where they carry me.

[Chris]

I'll remember that...thanks

[olla]

I discovered one day that it is terribly hard to write between the lines as well.. my personal favorite is.."having a wonderful time.. wish you were here.."