"How Are Things With Me..."

"How Are Things With Me..."

A Poem by Chris
"

I was asked...

"

I was asked today...

"How Are Things With Me... "

 

Less than they were,

less than I wished,

too quiet -

not desperate,

not right but not wrong,

a touch lonely -

a touch crowded.

I wondered...

and listened -

but neither

about nor to ...me.

 

...not very numb at all.

 

Chris

© 2012 Chris


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Posted 11 Years Ago


Chris

11 Years Ago

It was nice seeing you again. Take care.
love you

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hey Chris I finally made it here :-)
What a neat little ditty for a first time guest :-)
So how are you? Just kidding.. the word "content" comes to mind as I read your ditty:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


We get Budweiser here in Malaysia. Join me for a beer once in a while will ya?

Posted 12 Years Ago


When they ask they really don't want an answer. When you ask yourself, you do. And here you have yourself answered admirably. In fact more than admirably. So you are ok are you?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

Ken, I started adding to Chapter two of "Walking The World A Bit..." will add more to it this week -.. read more
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lei
...not very numb at all.

:) i'm glad! coming by to say hello!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

Hi Lei, its been awhile...
cute...so how are you?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chris

12 Years Ago

All of the above - of course.
And when the question was asked, they opened a huge door wide, and Chris stepped through to explore and answer.
Well answered my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Whispers become shouts.... Nice reply to it all ..saying much and saying little

Posted 12 Years Ago


Things are great here.... Nice write....

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Lansing, MI



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