"In The Darkness..."

Part of "Walking The World A Bit..." ...sigh...

 

"In The Darkness..."

the sounds of you

...barely stirring

echo so softly inside.

I don't even remember when the smile forms
but I feel it...

I really do.

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[John]

These lines delicately and movingly suggest a relationship so intimate that one person is felt to exist within another.

[Chris]

Quite an insight...thank you.

[Ruth]

That smile obviously happens internally as well as externally here, just so beautiful xoxo

[sharonlee]

Impossible not to feel a smile give birth when reading this. Thank You. x

[Pratik]

Wow! It's amazing to see how few lines as these are able to build an image that doesn't fail to linger. It is the isolated moments of existence that brings us spiritually close to the ones we love and all the darkness seems to ebb away! A very well captured thought! Nicely written :)

[Chris]

Thank you for your pause and for the thoughts you expressed so well.

[Pratik]

It was my pleasure :)

[Sheila Kline]

In the darkness it is memory of those we love that enables us to form such a smile!

[Chris]

A well expressed thought - thank you Sheila.

[Cherrie Palmer]

the echo of a memory is soft and warm just like this poem

[Ken Simm.]

This feels like a complete circle in the dark. It is that complete within itself.

[LoveDens]

nice one again chris.

[Chris]

Nat, thank you for pausing...ready for Manila?

[LoveDens]

yes...

[Art Sun]

nice work...even i the Darkness one can sense that smile...she must be lovely for you to feel that smile...

[Chris]

Its all in her heart...

[Heather]

Oh my... yes I can feel that smile. Such an affectionate piece. Beautiful.