"In The Darkness..."

Part of "Walking The World A Bit..." ...sigh...

 

"In The Darkness..."

the sounds of you

...barely stirring

echo so softly inside.

I don't even remember when the smile forms
but I feel it...

I really do.

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Ed Fagan]

brief and warm. what more could you ask?

[_mal]

This is beautiful

[unknown]

It's one of those poems that made me feel just a sense of awe. I like how it's short, but it has a sweet little message in it. :)

[Claire Twinn]

So sweet and subtle, it makes me remember the bliss of young love.

[Chris]

Hi, thanks for pausing with me.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Memories can hit us at the oddest times and with no rhyme or reason.

[Allycat]

You've expressed so much in these few lines
this is beautiful
I absolutely adore this piece
wonderful job Chris!

[Kelsey]

So short, so simple, so beautiful. Nicely done.

[Chris]

Glad you paused with mine... thank you.

[Brianna Van Zandt]

So few lines, but still so beautiful.

[Enid Blake]

Don't you love it when you catch yourself out smiling

[Chris]

...yes...

[A Soap Mess Stories]

such inspiring words...beautiful...