"I'm Scared..."

"I'm Scared..."

A Poem by Chris
"

I asked what a person was scared of... and they actually spoke.

"

 

"I'm Scared..."

I paused with each of your thoughts

- I didn't cry, though I felt the tears and frustrations

- I didn't laugh, to try breaking any tension or to misunderstand

- I didn't curse to ...to give acknowledgement and "been there"

I listened to my heart beat and felt the hollowness

I felt the world echo within my mind

and understood how frail it is to be you

to be us

today...

and what it is to face tomorrow.

Chris

© 2012 Chris


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The practice of presence... giving another's soul a safe space to express itself... a gift so rare we are blessed if one on our life knows how to give it... an art more than a science. True compassion flows through your words... yes, understanding what it is to be another, not trying to fix or change the topic. As Oriah Mountain Dreamer wisely asks,

"I want to know
if you can sit with pain
mine or your own
without moving to hide it
or fade it
or fix it."

Posted 12 Years Ago


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To ask, and then receive answers to the delicate little places of the heart, is sharing .. And then we know we are not so alone, there are hearts that beat with ours, and there are souls that wish on stars .. and somehow tomorrow doesn't seem such a fearful place to go .. .. Anger, fear and even the silly little emotions we can feel, need to be listened to, and truly heard .. For the moment, I feel better , reading your thoughts ..

Thanks for the gift, of YOU ..

I'm with Sharonlee, I'm scared too .. J.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Very caring thought, wrapped inside warm emotions...with a heart to share.

We sometimes aren't ready to listen when we ask. You were, and that was good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


your wisdom radiates

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a beautiful, touching thought..caring and warm..just like you

Posted 12 Years Ago


lovely and certainly the right response in that situation :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bewitching Sensations

12 Years Ago

yes so true
Chris

12 Years Ago

I'm glad you "paused"...
Bewitching Sensations

12 Years Ago

:)

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Chris
Chris

Lansing, MI



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