Rhetoric Introspection

Sensually mystic love story

Poem: Rhetoric Introspection
Written and recited by Anca Mihaela Bruma
Music by Johnny Alici - "I Am Tired"
Art: Dorina Costras

Rhetoric Introspection

I do not know what to regret anymore...
that I cannot reach you through our memories,
that an insane song cannot touch your soul,
or that you reversed yourself on the other side of Life?!...

I watched how spring drained from us
and not even a curved second could see anymore
the Miracle from us!...

Not even my own flying is vertical anymore
and I remained with my wings sealed
running barefoot on the shells of Time
on the look for that plenary Love
which you had promised along a sunset...

You stole the jewels of Time from beneath my eyelids...
just one white night struggled to reach the cloud's temple
and I do not have shores to reach.... anymore...
I just got lost in the morning known by nobody!...

(Anca Mihaela Bruma - 23rd June 2015)

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Reviews

[Adam Adams]

My fav. lines:

:I remained with my wings sealed
running barefoot on the shells of Time
on the look for that plenary Love
which you had promised along a sunset..

... You stole the jewels of Time from beneath my eyelids..."

I love how smoothly you reveal the feelings of your very heart... to the world. Excellent imagery you've portrayed in words. Very thought provoking write it is that's poetically hummed by your deep chords. I believe, your titles as well as your writes (the words you pen on) both're well chosen by you, indeed. So touching and romantically breathtaking stuffs you write on. Keep it up!

[Anca Mihaela Bruma]

"Poetically hummed by your deep chords", awesome expression, bravo dear Adams! I am truly pleased to know that my writings are "touching and romantically breathtaking". Thank you dear Adams!