Breathe You In

a simple lost love

Love me with your heart.
Don't just feel me with your skin,
Open up your soul
So you can feel me from within.
Positive aura and vibrations fill the room,
I don't know where mine ends and yours begin.
I see you smiling with your eyes,
You don't even need that precious grin.
The way you make me feel,
There's no way this isn't a sin.
My loyalty to you is everlasting,
You were there for me when my happiness went thin.
If you turned into a dolphin,
For you, i'd grow a thousand fins.
I'd follow you around the world,
All the way back to where it started,
Our secret spot in Berlin.
I can't get enough of your radiant energy,
I just love the way;
I breathe you in.

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Love at its best exemplifies all these qualities. It sustains within it an endless passion that could only be satiated by the love of its affections. All of us should aspire to love this way. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us.

[Fran Marie]

when that special someone
is the air you breathe and
makes you feel so loved
you know that's the one
for you ..your soul mate
to last a lifetime..nice poem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the absolute best when we can't tell where the other ends and we begin and vice=versa.
reminds us that both are creating that circle...
j.

[Anaya]

Your very right! Thanks for taking time to read my piece!

[Marina]

What a sweet story of love captured within a poem. I love the phrase "breathe you in." Says it all, really.

[Anaya]

Thank you! I randomly came up with the phrase "Breathe you in" then immediately fell in love with it and wrote this. So glad you enjoyed

[Planet x]

I love your words of love

[Anaya]

Thank you :)