Forbidden Us ; Forbidden Lust

I keep loving you... I know I shouldn't

Forbidden love.

Forbidden call.

Forbidden touch in the,

Forbidden hall.

Forbidden cries heard from the,

Forbidden stall.

Forbidden phone led to,

Forbidden text.

Forbidden “I miss you”’s from the,

Forbidden hex.

Forbidden rumors about,

Forbidden sex.

Forbidden “I love you”’s I whispered from my,

Forbidden bed.

Forbidden thoughts circling my 

Forbidden mind.

Forbidden waste of our,

Forbidden time.

Forbidden glances through those,

Forbidden lines.

Forbidden hands writing these,

Forbidden rhymes, to recap my,

Forbidden love for you one last time.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Don't think I've ever seen a poem with 23 lines all beginning with the same word. Interesting effect. It brings home very powerfully the profound conflict in the speaker's mind. The final line may indicate a decision on the speaker's part to end the deception. Wise choice. No one can live this way without a heavy supply of Xanax.

[Anaya]

Me either really, I just had forbidden and love in my head and it would not get out my brain. So I wrote it down and kind of just couldn't stop. About the ending, I wish I had a heavy supply of xanax to get me through this lol. But I did not, and to be quite frank I don't know if the love is over. It's like I need the love but it's no good for me some might say "forbidden" lol. Thanks for the review! You should check out some of my other stuff i'm a newbie!!