Death Calling

They said they would be back

Instead Death pulled them off life's track

Their words- well, fate begged to differ

Resulting in the walls guarding my heart to be stiffer

Next thing I knew, it was will, guardians and legal rights

But as a clueless child they are too confusing to fight

Having one hundred and three contacts flashing there

Yet still feeling no one cares

Isolated myself, pushed everyone away

Torture for me was the life I lived each day

They were my happiness, the reason I smiled

If only Angels had a number I may have dialled

I finally left my life of hell

After a deep breath, I took a step, and fell.

Author's Note

I'm not really sure whether this is good, so any feedback?

Reviews

[~a.wall~]

Wow! this is one of the most relate-able poems I've seem today. In all honesty and in addition to add some irony, I went through this very situation. It was written well and I think it has a lot of emotion behind this.

[Anavi]

I'm sorry to hear that, I hope all is okay, and thankyou very much!

[~a.wall~]

its okay