Psychic vampire

Vampires, but not as we know them

Every human being

Transformed

Into a sphere of energy

Stored deep inside

Waiting to be fed on

 

Searching for the perfect

Match

The one who will complete

My inner core

My utmost being

 

Looking with infrared

Vision

Allowing to spot

The most pacified one

Allowing me to enter the unknown

 

I will feed on it’s soul

Compete

With their enemies

Fighting off the prejudiced

Entering the pool of life

 

Reviews

[Benarsi]

Wow...:)

I've never heard about the concept of a 'psychic' vampire, sounds very interesting and also slightly frightening...:)

Anyway, great poem here, short but sweet, with good wording and flow. I especially liked

"I will feed on it�s soul
Compete
With their enemies
Fighting off the prejudiced
Entering the pool of life"

In all, a very thoughtful, deep piece of writing :)

Thanks for sharing!

B.

[Story Keeper]

I liked it, particularly the first paragraph. It was very poetic.

[Lady Ellen]

Very nice piece of work about the psychic vampire. I love the last line. " Entering the pool of life." Yes, very nice indeed.

[Chan]

Perfect imagery. Wonderful piece. I like how you use the lines like "Looking with infrared vision" as metaphors to describe the vampire's ability to sneak into other's minds and souls to find whom the vampire is wanting for that night.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Fantastic!!! I love this poem!!!

Heather

[Writes Like A Piece Of ..]

I don't know if you intended the metaphor, but turning love into vampirism is a fascinating comparison. I like the way you approached this poem.