A way out

A way out

A Poem by Anata
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I feel like I’m slipping away

Drowning, struggling

I can’t find the way out

Won’t you help me

 

Each day I wonder

Each day I seek

Answers never found

Cluttering in my mind

 

My footsteps leave their marks

And I don’t seem to find

What they mean to me

Fading before my eyes

 

I feel like I’m slipping away

Drowning, struggling

I can’t find the way out

Won’t you help me

 

All these people

Walking by

I can’t escape their haunting looks

Glued to my pupils

 

And each day

I search for myself

I search to find nothing

No way out

 

I feel like I’m slipping away

Drowning, struggling

I can’t find the way out

Won’t you help me

 

In my dreams

I see what I have become

A silhouette of what once was

A darker side of me

 

Trying to find

Who I was before

Reaching out for that one voice

That will straighten my path

 

I feel like I’m slipping away

Drowning, struggling

I can’t find the way out

Won’t you help me

 

© 2008 Anata


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I feel like I�m slipping away
Drowning, struggling
I can�t find the way out
Won�t you help me

Loved this! :)

"Trying to fing
Who I was before"

So sad...

"In my dreams
I see what I have become
A silhouette of what once was
A darker side of me"

Dark, mysterious yet so utterly truthful! Really nice flow in this and wonderful wording.

Thanks for sharing!

B,





Posted 17 Years Ago


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