The pathway

Searching a way

Falling

Slipping away

Deeper and deeper

To the core

Of me

 

Searching

Answers within reach

Fading away

From my hands

From me

 

Crying

Sobbing and desperate

Trying to find

Me

 

Understanding

Solutions nearby

Appearing slowly

To my eyes

To me

 

Absorbing

Plans are formed

In my mind

In me

 

Reflecting

My goal is set

My life

Me

 

Reviews

[Dylan Cook]

I like the rhythm and flow of it

[Benarsi]

Crying
Sobbing and desperate
Trying to find
Me

Such lovely, short (but powerful! :)) lines, great, strong ending:

Reflecting
My goal is set
My life
Me

You capture so much emotion with so little, Anata! Genius! :)

B.