The evil in good

My fortress

Protector against one celled organisms

Eliminator of alien intruders

 

My battery

Creator of life

Cleaner of fluids

 

My shell

Holder of secrets

Bringer of feelings

 

My twin

Carrier of disease

Transporter of fear

 

My ultimate nightmare

Incarnator of doubts

Impersonator of emotions

 

My personal destructor

Creator of life

devastator of living

 

My personal capsule

Myself

Me

 

Reviews

[bob26]

really enjoyed the read. thank you.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is so interesting, me myself and I , we like it @
My twin
Carrier of disease
Transporter of fear

Great lines,love it!

Peace

Chloe

[M Lamont]

Well done!!

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I do like this s**t..Every reading is seeing a lil further....Just wondering ,forgive my ignorance ,is your twin your Alter Ego ,or a darker side maybe ,thats just how I took it n if so love it...You do yourself and others a favor n keep writing ,I stopped at 18 an started again 4 months ago...Is good for me ,is good for my twin..It is certainly good for you........

[Valentine]

This is a totally different form than I am used to reading. The poem speaks totally for itself, My shell..the body...my battery..the heart. Your personal destructor or is the er? Is God almighty, the one who created live..It was satan not God who devastated the living. All of the rest I can see vividly...Nice read//valentine

[Niki Nonsense]

awesome poem. very nice. i like the structure and the last stanza.