Seven sins so tempting

Seven sins opposed to their seven virtues

Peering into the distance

She can’t fight her inner truth

She needs it so much

Lust is her favorite sin

Let her come

She’ll extol you’re useless existence

With words unrolled in purity

Craving

She can never stop

Gluttony has her begging for more

Doesn’t mind what it takes

She admires

She takes whatever she can get

With a self-control

Unseen by those who couldn’t compete

She ignores your soul

She doesn’t care for less

Greed has taken place

She’ll fight her heart out

Generous as never seen before

She’ll push you to forget yourself

Commanding every single of your moves

Sinking further into her deadliest sin

Sloth controls her movements

Pushing you for more

With ethics

Unimaginable for those who don’t give in

She doesn’t settle for normal

Nor will she go for outrageousness

Her wrath will drive you

To peaceful moments

She’ll make sure you don’t come

She envies all who laugh at her

She’ll pierce your eyes out

So comments will loose effect

Loose the power to influence

her charity in taking

She never walks away

Too proud to let go

She pursues her every sin

Modest

As she passes by

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

Lust is her favourite sin
Let her come
She�ll extol you�re useless existence
With words unrolled in purity

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

The only thing, I think it seemed a tiny bit hurried in the end with the stanzas getting a bit shorter as it went. Other than that, loved it!

[Riverdance]

Ooh, this is lovely! Well worded, too. You really got the point across in a meaningful way. Great write!

[Dane Osborne]

I realy liked this. Realy thought provoking. Is the the theme something to do with sin as an inherent part of nature part of the natural laws that govern us and that the anguish that comes from it is a product of our nature as well. Damnation by design, interesting. but that's just the message I got from it am I right?

[Sam Freeland]

To enjoy the ravishing with words
is why we read. So purely taken.
Do take us on the ride again.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love this! Well worded, well written and thoughtful.

Peace

[Kitsue]

Creative. Greatr way to give justice to the 7 deadly sins. The way thaeir arranged seems to tie in as well. Your work is very well thought out.

[Gary H]

Very cleverly done and well worked out. I imagine this took a fair bit of planning and the results are definately there in the reading. Great work!