I

I am night

I am day

I am sea

I wash my troubles away

 

I am you

I am unique

I’m a whole

I create my own

 

I was

Therefore I am

 

Reviews

[J]

I like the simpleness of this, which should be easily relatable to a lot of people. And... don't we all wash our troubles away somehow? I sure do...

Thanks for sharing =)
J

[Sammypookins]

Love the beginning,
I am night
I am day
I am sea
I wash my troubles away

I would love to wash my troubles away, if only life were that simple. I like the simplicity of it too.
Sam

[C. Harter Amos]

This says a lot in its simplicity. Very strong and forceful work and well done, I thought. Enjoyed the read. - Mimi.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is great!
Love it! I am night
I am day
I am sea
I wash my troubles away
Great lines!

Peace

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I ,am impressed...

[Taylor Morgan]

I love thid it like gives my confidense..

[C.k.crowhurst]

It's nice to take a look at yourself, and especially nice that it comes out sounding VERY positive!
I really like this, nice imagery and rhythm.