Shall I

Shall I tell you my secrets

Shall I spill on you my words

Shall I whisper

Shall I spoil you with my thoughts

 

Shall I trust

Shall I remember

Shall I recognize you

When you enter

When you call my name

When you reach out

 

Shall I comfort you

Shall I please you

Shall I be able to

Shall I sacrifice you

 

Shall I know

Shall I endure

Shall I be alive

When you ask me

When you love me

When you are there

 

Shall I ever

Shall I always

Will you be there

Will you remember

Will you endure

 

When I whisper to you

When I call for you

When I need you

 

Shall we?

 

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

Shall I ever
Shall I always
Will you be there
Will you remember
Will you endure

Lovely rhythmic flow. Moving and questioning with a wonderful tone. I adore it. You are incredible. You did something new with a flair!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Love the questions here, I don't have the answers though.

This is good I love it!

I like repetition in poetry, with shall I, shall I.. good work.

Peace

Chloe

[M Lamont]

Great piece. Topics that are a question are so fun because we get to throw it out for the audeince to answer. Great job!

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[Riverdance]

Shall I trust
Shall I remember
Shall I recognize you
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Shall I be able
Shall I find the words
Shall I answer well
When I reply to you

Life is nothing but one big question, really, and I loved how you combined them into one overall poem. This is a really great work. I liked it a lot. =)