Painkiller

She looks like your average girl

A smile as sweet as banana liqueur

One blink

And she sets your world on fire

She looks so innocent

 

At night

She reaches out for her one true love

She protects it with her life

Her painkiller

Sweet lust invoker

 

One smoke

And she’s passed this world

She looks so sweet

Drowning in her own desires

She seems so innocent

Giving in to the moment

 

Her body covered with sweat

She’ll beg you for more

She is so hot

Just one more smoke

And she’ll obey your every command

 

In the morning

She wakes up

Still in the rush of last night

She seems so sweet

Just one more smoke

Will take the pain away

 

My painkiller

Sweet lust invoker

Come to me once more

And take my insecurities away

 

Reviews

[Tigerlobo]

YES!! This is what I'm looking for!! You blend love and addiction into the one thing we love and suffer, the smoking gun we love to wrap our lips around!! The other contest submissions will have top this one because I am in love with your lover and I wanna hit on her too! Will you share just one "sweet lust invoker" with me?

At night
She reaches out for her one true love
She protects it with her life
Her painkiller
Sweet lust invoker

Sex is obsolete when you can suck the very marrow from your lit lover!! *phhhhht* *ahhhhh*

Brava, Anata! Brava!!

[C. Harter Amos]

In my case, my lover was my addiction so it was a much simpler thing to deal with until it turned bad, as most addictions do. You've done a good job of making the reader feel things from your point of view. I liked the "just one more" and again "come to me once more and take my insecurities away." It's almost always about that once more... Kudos from me on this one. - Mimi.

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Ye talkin the other side o the road for me ,its all good though..Comparisons abound ,,Sweet Lust Invoker ,I LOVE..

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is a love poem about a drug, I like the comparison..I like the poem it is well written and thought provoking and you saying she looks so sweet..This is very nice.

Peace

[Miranda]

oh what a great poem. i wish i could write something like that.