Mime

Mime

A Poem by Anata
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When emotions play mime

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My emotions playing mime 

In an invisible box

Getting out is no option

You cannot break invisible locks

Every tear I shed

Drowns me further to oblivion

No drains for exceed water

No space for air

It’s a vicious loop slaughter

I’m prime suspect number one

The mime is on repeat

Every day yet another struggle

Battling something that isn’t there

Is an enemy hard to defeat

Yelling is in vain

Screaming doesn’t work

Trying to find my invisible rope

Contained by an illusionary chain

Hard to remember me

Constantly locked up inside myself

The mime box concealing

What I used to be

Fighting something that isn’t there

Is an impossible healing

 

© 2008 Anata


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I liked this one. theme is more developed and the images are wonderful. Not sure about the lines Fighting "something that isn't there
Is an impossible healing" as the ending the lines above have a little more punch I'd be tempted to do this ...
(and its always your choice !)

"Fighting something that isn't there
Is an impossible healing
The mime box concealing
What I used to be"

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked this one. theme is more developed and the images are wonderful. Not sure about the lines Fighting "something that isn't there
Is an impossible healing" as the ending the lines above have a little more punch I'd be tempted to do this ...
(and its always your choice !)

"Fighting something that isn't there
Is an impossible healing
The mime box concealing
What I used to be"

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Anata
Anata

Houthalen, Belgium



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