Bad trip

Bad trip

A Poem by Anata
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When going for a journey turns bad

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My head floating

In a world of colours

Venturing skies up high

Movements are fluent

Gliding – sliding

Everything is so e a s y

 

My twirls are gracious

Clouds embracing my wings

Pounding music in my mind

Moving to the beat

So automatically

So e a s y

 

Words form weird mixtures

Syllables don’t glue

I create my own conversation

As yours is mixed in my head

It’s my heartbeat that I hear

The beat that keeps me going

It is e a s y

 

It is natural

So normal I don’t think

Nor react

My eyes are fixed

People stare and rattle

The white blankets round me

Shield me from harm

So e a s y

 

So comforting

As I fall

Gently twirl down

Colours turn red

Dark, bright red

The music hurts my ears

Pounding in my head

Disrupting the voices

And I fall

So e a s y

 

© 2008 Anata


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This is an amazing poem. The colors are awesome with it. Great write!!!

Heather

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful...I love the colors you chose for the font..it just adds an extra something to the imagery.
Excellent!


Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Anata
Anata

Houthalen, Belgium



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