Scented Erotism

Scented Erotism

A Poem by Anata
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Erotica from a different point of view

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Scents dwelling in the air

Creating a luscious sweet atmosphere

Tantalizing thoughts as we pass through

Letting the vapour cloud our minds

I feel your hands on my shoulders

Warm and comforting

Breathing in the hallucinating vapours

I allow myself to feel

Transcending slowly into an unknown dimension

Your hands carefully slide down my back

The heat of your body fuels mine

As you gently touch my hips

Your kisses like rose petals in my neck

The fumes of essential oils clouding our decency

You hold me tight

Press me against your body

As the rose scented damps take us into discretion

Your body becomes one with mine

And with this embrace

We create our own perfume

The atmosphere changes

As we climb the mountain together

Aligning our moves

The pace we create our own

When  we reached the top

Scented eroticism populated the room

 

© 2008 Anata


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In this one I can really feel the intertwining of two souls. Sounds like love making to me between two people that care about each other. Really like the original way you describe each phase of the interlude. Breathtakingly beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Everyone writes sensually about touch or sight, smells can elicit erotic responses powerfully. You've created quite an experience here. Beautiful!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

mmmm...absolutely loved it darling

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Anata. this is so sensual and beautiful.. i like the use of scent in the poem and many times rose petals are equated with romance and passion and that is what your poem is, very beautiful..

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written sensual poetry. Elegant...leaving plenty to the reader's imagination. Lydia

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Anata
Anata

Houthalen, Belgium



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