wow..it's eerie yet so romantic. i loved this piece. it was haughtingly beautiful. i love how you repeated the My beloved and My immortal. just beautiful.
Anata, this is wow, the wording, the mysterious ambient flow,
the form is sculpted to height of your expression, portraying
enigmatic shadow of desires, emotions enraptured within passions
provovative embrace, surrendering heart to love's eternal force,
captivating, dark in a hypnotically riveting way, take care, mike
So :) first of all, i'm 25 years old. Second :p my real name is 'Siva, it's from India, though i have no relations whatsoever there.
I enjoy writing, and have recently found my passion again, as i .. more..