Insanity for Love

Insanity for Love

A Poem by Anata
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Ophelia's madness takes form

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A stab to the heart

My beloved

A stab to our love

My immortal

 

Your presence

A haunting romance

I search

My beloved

Sky and heaven rejected

I crave

My immortal

 

I dig and find not

My hearth growing cold

Your breath froze

My beloved

Your touch left alone

I search

My immortal

 

I pray no more

Behind the corner

Shadows haunting

I run

My beloved

I seek you

A puddle of blood

My immortal

 

Lay me down

In a river shallow

I feel you

My beloved

Your voice calling

They guided me

My immortal

© 2008 Anata


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wow..it's eerie yet so romantic. i loved this piece. it was haughtingly beautiful. i love how you repeated the My beloved and My immortal. just beautiful.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, just wow! Eerie and haunting but in a romantic melancholy way. These are beautiful words floating on the wind.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very impressive...commanding read!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anata, this is wow, the wording, the mysterious ambient flow,
the form is sculpted to height of your expression, portraying
enigmatic shadow of desires, emotions enraptured within passions
provovative embrace, surrendering heart to love's eternal force,
captivating, dark in a hypnotically riveting way, take care, mike

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 7, 2008
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Anata
Anata

Houthalen, Belgium



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