Soul-mate

Your soul is the best friend you'll ever have

Transcended into time

Lasted lifetimes and more

 

It’s the little voice in your head

The one that makes you see

All what’s wrong

And tries to make you do right instead

 

It’s the essence you feel

Alone at night, when you ponder

Holding your head, ashamed

What comforts you deep inside

 

It’s the silent hug in the middle of the day

At work

When things are about to burst

Comforting and bringing peace

 

It’s what makes you remember

The déja-vu popping into your head

To straighten your path

Curving your thoughts

 

It’s the warm and familiar touch

Reminding you

At the bitterest of times

You can make a difference

 

Companion into times

Lasting until you have completed

Your life-series fulfilled

 

Reviews

[Gandré]

A wonderful description for the thing we are looking for. Mr Freud's pupil, Jung was a dreamer he called it anima and animus. I like that you have here this two colors design and it was enjoyable insightful read.

also, thanks for submitting this poem for my contest. the decition of picking three finalists will be a hard job.

yours, lara gandr�

[Staci Brown]

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YES! I love your insight into one's own soul as their soul mate! My poem Journey Into the Heart is exactly this!!! Just no one's really caught it yet. :)

I love the pretty colours you've chosen to use for this piece also! :) I'm a pink and purple freak! lol My drums and guitars tend to be purple or pink! lol

Faerie Blessings!
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[Kayla]

wow this is so heartfelt and beautiful. i have found a twin soul in my partner, but this poem made me feel my own soul. It is the only soul that can truly know and comfort you. my favorite lines are,
"It's the essence you feel
Alone at night, when you ponder
Holding your head,ashamed
What comforts you deep inside"
those lines are magnificant, and touched me deeply. kudos!

[Julian]

"It�s the silent hug in the middle of the day
At work
When things are about to burst
Comforting and bringing peace "
Where would we be without the comfort of all the things you have written about inthis lovely poem. Enjoyed. Julian :)

[Bubo]

Lovely ...........your own soul that brings comfort..........the colour I actually
enjoyed all except the black which I feel should come on line with the
other colours............both in italics..............
my fave part was.........

It�s what makes you remember
The d�ja-vu popping into your head
To straighten your path
Curving your thoughts

The soul can be seen to be so many things!

[Roxanne]

I really enjoy the idea behind the poem. My only issue was with your format. I really think that you should break up your stanzas and add some punctuation. I noticed after a while that you did have sections in italics but with the color, it was very difficult to notice the distinction. I can understand the desire to separate those sections is such a way, it was just hard to discern. But it's a really good concept.