Chocolate killer sweetness

Chocolate ...

Be it black, white or brown

Molten, frozen or fridge cooled

She enjoys every bit

Letting the sugar give her that extra

The so needed energy boost

 

She licks her lips

Lusciously taking in all the sweet

Letting it melt on her tongue

The sweetish sensation

When it glides through her gullet

 

Oh addicting gluttony

How can she ever get enough

Her body is dependant

And her mind follows loyally

In the rush of the moment

 

Just one more lick

Sucking on that hard bit of comfort

Feel the silky touch on her tongue

The gluey sensation on her teeth

Sugar comforting sweetness

 

Enjoying every moment

She falls for her lovely amor

Sugar overload busting in

Just one more bite

Her heartbeat stopped at the thought

 

Reviews

[James K. Blaylock]

my God,i sure could go for something sweet right about now. this was a tease of a poem LOL. it got me in the moad for chocolate...and now the reading is done and i'm here left empty-handed. all joking aside i enjoyed reading it. i liked this stanza the most

Just one more lick
Sucking on that hard bit of comfort
Feel the silky touch on her tongue
The gluey sensation on her teeth
Sugar comforting sweetness

[Jasmina Amethyst Pendra..]

Just one more lick
Sucking on that hard bit of comfort
Feel the silky touch on her tongue
The gluey sensation on her teeth
Sugar comforting sweetness

You can never have just one! LOL I adore chocolate. It is sinfully sensual in its silky smooth taste and so is this poem. ~Liv

[Bubo]

Such a lovely piece!!
Anyone who loves chocolate will know that
its almost a sensual thing!
Loved the play on words and it reminded me
abit of "Insatiable".............all those great words used!

She licks her lips
Lusciously taking in all the sweet
Letting it melt on her tongue
The sweetish sensation
When it glides through her gullet

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Oh a poem about chocolate.. which i love.. so glad you used the words sucking and licking .. no chocolate should be bitten into.. this is a 'sweet' poem..

Loved it!

Chloe
xoxo

[Taja B.]

Hmm I love chocolate! I swear, it's the most delicious candy in history! I don't know what I could do without it!lol. Haha Now I want some chocolate right now!lol....

Well anyways, I really like this. This is a well written poem that has a slightly sensual vibe, but you can still tell that your only writing about chocolate. Plus, it's really descriptive.

Nice job.:)

[Lola Lamont]

Wow... I didn't think it was physically possible to love chocolate anymore than I already do... but after reading this, it's mind-blowing! It seems almost like the script for a chocolate advert... I can picture it perfectly in my mind. I love the flow of the poem, as liquid as melted chocolate, and then the last line is so distinctly abrupt. Beautiful Anata. Now I'm off to hunt down some chocolate...... mmmmm.

[Nathan Strange]

That is really good, i need a drink now as you made my mouth water! Good write! Sensational in fact!

[Wulfstan Crumble]

Oh you are exploring sin. haha. i will read the illegal one next. Ladies often say that chocolate is as good as a word that i dare not type at work (a school). Your poem is deliciously sweet... full of satisfying hunger words. The poem is slick and luxurious to the mind, taste and feel. Nice job.

[Erotic Goddess]

Just one more lick
Sucking on that hard bit of comfort
Feel the silky touch on her tongue
The gluey sensation on her teeth
Sugar comforting sweetness

LMAO! I am sitting here eating a candy bar when I read this, which I immediately set down. We'll save the rest for later. This was so funny! I LOVE CHOCOLATE! Sheer addiction. Sex and chocolate, two things this girl could not live without. :) Thank you for sharing this. I loved it!!!

[Monica M. Martin]

This poem is a chocolate lover�s delight, smooth and deliciously sensual.