You

This is my very first poem. Its about a boy that hurt me emotionally.

You had my heart 

and gave it a punch, 

handed it back and 

now it hurts. 

Stay away forever and 

never come back. 

We are nothing but 

dust in the wind. 

You try to get back togther 

but i decide whether 

we go or not. its hard 

to say anything but okay. 

I try to make i twork but 

we are dust in the wind. 

nothing can put us together 

we are two different peices. 

Two different peices of 

the same puzzle. we 

fit to other people but 

are in the same picture. 

my heart and my mind 

are on two seperate pages. 

one wants you but the other 

knows i cant have you. 

you belong with her 

and i with him 

we try to be with each other 

but we are drawn away. 

i am one thing and 

you the opposite. 

they say opposites attract 

but they were wrong. 

i gave you my heart 

and you gave it a punch, 

handed it back and 

now it hurts.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems please.

Reviews

[kariannrose]

I can feel your pain through your writing. Nice job conveying your emotions.

[Elephants & Coyotes]

It's always hard to continue loving someone who's hurt you.
Nice write.
=)