Looking

If you live with just

One eye open, you might miss

An entire world.

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Short and sweet, but tells a lot.

[Anastasia_Snow]

Thanks for reading and the review, Paul!

[Alice Poésy]

I often find that the shortest poems hold the most truth, and this strengthens my belief. "One eye open" the significance is so many. "One eye open" to adventure, to love, to opportunities, to life - the connotations are endless.

Lovely piece of work. Short, but says a lot.

[Anastasia_Snow]

Thanks very much, Alice!

[iamshadowine]

Did I just read the shortest poem which speaks for all the poems on truth? Yes, I did!
OH MY GOD! This is so good!! I love it :D

keep writing :D

[Anastasia_Snow]

Thank you so much for your kind and enthusiastic comments, Shadowine! And thanks for reading! I'm really happy that you liked it. (: